Compose Your Testimony
Authored by:

DEAN M. SCHREYER

Attorney At Law*

dean@menslegal.com

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The 5 Essential Keys For Presenting Your Evidence

4.  KNOW HOW TO COMPOSE YOUR WRITTEN TESTIMONY

ON THIS PAGE:

A. Know the Two Major Questions Your Testimony Must Answer
B. Know The Analysis That The Judge Will Probably Use In Deciding On A Parenting Plan
C. Start With An Outline
D. Use Our "Master Outline" For Child Custody Disputes
E. Fill In Your Outline With the Juicy Details
F. Slant Your Testimony In Your Favor
G. Create Headlines From Your Outline
H. Keep It Short And Sweet
I. Consider Starting Your Testimony With A Summary Or Table Of Contents

A.  Know The Two Major Questions You And Your Evidence Must Answer    

    The 2 major questions your testimony must address are:


(1)  What parenting plan do you want the court to adopt?

 

(2)  How or why would that parenting plan be the one that will best protect and promote your child’s rights and interests?

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B.  Know The Analysis That The Judge Will Probably Use In Deciding On A Parenting Plan

    The judge’s analysis will probably follow this progression:

(1)  Review the status quo (current) parenting plan

(a)  What is your child's status quo parenting plan?

(b)  How or why does the status quo contribute to or detract from your child's rights and interests?

(2)  Review the proposed (new) parenting plan(s)

(a)  What is/are the proposed parenting plan(s)?

(b)  How or why will the proposed parenting plan(s) contribute to or detract from your child's rights and interests?

(3)  Decide which parenting plan is best for your child

(a)  How badly will the proposed parenting plan disrupt the child’s status quo?

(b)  Will the net benefit of the proposed parenting plan outweigh the net detriment caused by the disruption of the child's status quo?

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C.  Start With An Outline

    Outlining serves two functions:  

(1)  It provides a relatively quick way to list all the points and issues you want to address; and,

 

(2)  It then provides a tool for organizing your testimony, to best address those points and issues.

 

D.  Use Our "Master Outline" For Child Custody Disputes

(1)    You can use our "Master Outline" for child custody disputes, HERE, as a guide to help you assemble your outline for your written testimony.

This "Master Outline" provides:

(a)  A checklist of the factors that judges usually consider in deciding on a parenting plan; and,

(b)  A tool to help you organize your testimony to follow the analysis that the judge is most likely to use.

(2)    Prune out those parts of the "Master Outline" that are not relevant to your case.

(3)    Fill in your outline with your written testimony, using the principles indicated below.

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E.  Fill In Your Outline With the Juicy Details

    You know the drill: who, what, where, when, why, how.

 

F.  Slant Your Testimony In Your Favor

   Your testimony should accomplish one or more of the following three goals:

(1)  Motivate the reader to conclude: “Gee, I’m glad [the other parent] was not my parent when I was growing up!”

 

(2)  Motivate the reader to conclude: “Gee, I wish [you] had been my parent when I was growing up!”

 

and,

 

(3)  Provide the reader with your explanations, denials, rebuttals, and other responses to the nasty stuff that the other parent has said or will say about you.

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G.  Create Headlines From Your Outline

    Use your outline headings as a series of headlines for your testimony. They will dramatically increase the odds that the judge will in fact understand and consider that testimony. Here's why:

 

    Look at the articles in any metropolitan newspaper. Notice that they always begin with headlines, which have the following in common:

(1)  They are the first thing you read;

(2)  They help you very quickly and easily determine what the article is about;

(3)  They tell you what the perspective and conclusion of the author are going to be;

(4)  They tell you whether or not you want to read some or all of the article;

and, get this:

(5)  In only one sentence.

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   As noted HERE, judges have far too much to do in far too little time. Hence, any tool which helps the judge to understand your written testimony quickly, will dramatically increase the odds that the judge will in fact understand and consider that testimony. Headlines in your written testimony will do precisely that, because:

(1)  They will be the first thing the judge reads; 

(2)  They will help the judge very quickly and easily determine what the subsequent testimony is about;

(3)  They will tell the judge what the perspective and conclusions of the testimony are going to be;

(4)  They will tell the judge whether or not the judge will want to read some or all of the testimony;

and, get this:

(5)  In only one sentence.

    Using headlines will thereby substantially improve the odds that the judge will actually consider and understand your written testimony. So use your outline headings to create those headlines.

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H.  Keep It Short And Sweet

    Leave out all material that is extraneous to your point. Keep your written testimony as short as is possible, while still addressing and explaining everything that needs to be addressed and explained.

 

    As noted above, any tool which helps the judge to understand your written testimony quickly, will dramatically increase the odds that the judge will in fact understand and consider that testimony. Keeping your testimony short and sweet will do precisely that.

I.  Consider Starting Your Testimony With A Summary Or Table Of Contents

    After assembling your written testimony, consider printing your outline at the beginning, as an introduction. This will provide to the reader a summary of your testimony and, thereby, a second chance with which to get your message across.

   Also, if the written testimony is lengthy, consider converting that introduction into a table of contents.

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